How long do users stay on a web page? For the last decade and a half everybody has asked that question, but the answer remains the same…
Not very long.
It’s the unbreakable rule of the web. Web users are a fickle bunch. That’s why web copy always demands precision, clarity, and persuasion. And the best way to write short sales messages like this is to use a proven formula known as Problem-Agitate-Solve (PAS).
The concept is simple:
- Problem: Identify your reader’s pain point.
- Agitate: Stir it up so it hurts to the point of discomfort.
- Solve: Deliver a solution.
Here’s how it looks in practice:
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The question immediately identifies your target customer: shy, timid people. They’ll answer “yes” to the question. Then they’ll get it in the gut when they read about the consequence of ignoring their problem.
But don’t let them wallow in their misery. Show them a way out. In this case, a book with a secret to conquering insecurity in less than a month.
Two Other Problem-Agitate-Solve Examples
What’s wonderful about this formula is it helps you zero in on what’s truly important. Short sales copy always does. You need to come out with the big guns. The big emotions. Fear. Greed. Lust.
And you need to offer a solution for that one indisputable problem ailing your customer.
Here’s how you could write short sales copy for Crazy Egg’s heat map tool:
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Keep in mind, you CAN’T do this successfully without first understanding your customer and their basic problems. It’s simply impossible.